Feel free to comment n criticism....

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Permalink Reply by Fred on October 18, 2011 at 7:08am

The girl is too central, too dark and I keep looking at the background rather than her.

Sorry but I would return to the site and photograph the background

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Permalink Reply by Raja Afzaludin B. Raja Abdullah on October 18, 2011 at 8:04pm

no prob dude....your comment will help in in future.....thanks for your advise really help ful

 

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Permalink Reply by Philsphoto on October 20, 2011 at 9:50am

Wow!  Very pretty model, well lit, sharp, and the colors explode!  I really like this image.  I would be very happy to have this image in my portfolio!

 

Improvement Suggestions: 

1) Her legs have a red hue to them, looking like they may be sun burned.  Maybe you could select the legs and drop the red saturation just a bit?

2) The wall is amazing but does cause competition for attention.  I wonder if you blur the back ground by just 10% and see what this would look like?

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Permalink Reply by Raja Afzaludin B. Raja Abdullah on December 16, 2011 at 2:23am

nothing wrong with her leg... i just started learning to used lighitng strobe to shoot this picture......

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Permalink Reply by Jeffery Pyke on October 22, 2011 at 9:41am

This photo is a great capture.  The colors are interesting and boisterous without crossing that line into confusing I feel.  I think the pose is unique and the camera height is appropriate.  My only technical criticism would be to slightly off center the subject to create slightly more depth in the composition and to isolate either the background or model as the subject... but only maybe.  Although it is almost never a good idea to center your subject in the frame it almost works in this instance.  This photo might even benefit from a different cropping, maybe a square?  I am an amateur photographer myself so don't cite my advice as a pro, these ideas are just where my mind went first.  Either way, you got skills!  Good luck!

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Permalink Reply by Raja Afzaludin B. Raja Abdullah on December 16, 2011 at 2:22am

thanks..... your comment really help me in future...... i will improve in future..... thanks again....

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Permalink Reply by CameraClicker on October 23, 2011 at 5:48am

I agree with the others.  The background competes too well.  A bit darker and not as sharp might help.    Her legs are darker and more saturated than the rest of her skin.

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Permalink Reply by Raja Afzaludin B. Raja Abdullah on December 16, 2011 at 2:20am

i shot this picture with my wide angle.... still learning how to used lighting...thats why her legs is a bit dark... :D... and i need to improve in my editing skills...thanks for your comment

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Permalink Reply by rob on October 23, 2011 at 3:52pm

i wonder if the back ground was done in b/w and the model left in color . and fixing darkness like the others have requested. 

    compliments on have an attractive model to make this shot

good luck 

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Permalink Reply by Raja Afzaludin B. Raja Abdullah on December 16, 2011 at 2:19am

thanks for your comment....  i will improve in future.....

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Permalink Reply by Richard Segi on December 16, 2011 at 5:53am

I like your shot mate only thing I might have an issue with is the bg it kinda stands out a bit too much. 

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Permalink Reply by Raja Afzaludin B. Raja Abdullah on December 16, 2011 at 5:32pm

i will re edit the picture.....

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