I would like some constructive criticism

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Permalink Reply by Joseph Leason on November 17, 2008 at 2:59pm

I love them all, they have a rustic feel to them all.. on #2 I like the large blurry space.. :)

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Permalink Reply by Michael Bartholome on November 17, 2008 at 8:10pm

I agree with Joseph.

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Permalink Reply by Sean on November 17, 2008 at 8:28pm

Off to a great start. What was it that you thought you needed improvement on? Or is your work not looking like you wanted? Otherwise I would say keep doing what you are doing.

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Permalink Reply by Davers on November 17, 2008 at 9:02pm

I like them all aswell. Great captures!

I would try
#1 try Black and White
#2 darken a tad and crop half of second window ( left side ) to about the (drill? on the window)
#3 boost contrast
#4 sweet shot

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Permalink Reply by rtkphoto on November 17, 2008 at 9:37pm

Thanks a lot for the comments guys! And thanks a lot David, any suggestions like that are greatly appreciated. :D

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Permalink Reply by Roland Caranzo on December 5, 2008 at 4:38am

all photos are good already.

well, i would like to recommend,
#1 - love to see in sepia mode.... with soft touch of blur effects.
#2 - darken more the background and leave the human subject untouch

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