NEED CRITIQUES!!!!

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Permalink Reply by Peter Salas on January 18, 2010 at 10:49am

I'm just helping out a bit, but here are the photos. It's helpful to post them here so that people don't have to scavenge around looking for your pictures to critique:


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Permalink Reply by Sabrina Romero on January 18, 2010 at 5:48pm

Thanks Peter!!! I thought about that actually on the way home from work! What did you think of the pictures? How can I improve on them???

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Permalink Reply by Rick Pechous on January 18, 2010 at 7:19pm

Hi Sabrina.... did you shoot the photo's or were you the subject?

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Permalink Reply by Sabrina Romero on January 18, 2010 at 8:59pm

I took the photos of a friend from work. What do you think I could do to improve next time?

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Permalink Reply by Sean on January 19, 2010 at 7:59pm

All of the photos are shot at about the same angle of photographer to subject. Change up your angle. Try stay away from the built in flash. The built in flash is too small and creates a harsh shadow on your subject. The bigger the light in relation to your subject the softer the shadows will be. Allow the shadows to help give depth to the face, flooding it with light will leave it flat.

Study light and how it acts. This will allow you do make it do your bidding :-)

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Permalink Reply by alex re on February 10, 2010 at 1:28pm

Hi there, I think 4-7 and the last 14-16 are underexposed, and in general I think you could give your pictures a little more space? I'm really into close-ups, but somehow your pics feel to me a bit too "crowded"...

Cheers,

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