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Permalink Reply by James Elliott on March 19, 2010 at 9:06pm

The composition of both shots are great, ecspecially in the second one. However there are a few downsides.

In shot number one the bright light is too harsh and overexposed so the shot is very weak. Also the shot is a bit blurry. The focus needs to be on your models face.

Shot number two is a very good shot. The shot can only be improved in two ways. Have a lower exposure so that the people make a a darker silhouette or a longer exposure so you can make out more detail in them.

Hope I have helped.

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Permalink Reply by Ora Pasion on March 20, 2010 at 9:23am

Thank you so much. This is what I needed a objective look, so I can improve on my photography skills. Would you mind if I added u as a friend?.

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Permalink Reply by Murray Edwards on March 20, 2010 at 10:57am

Your first image is out of focus, unless you were trying for a soft focus affect. On your second image, tighten up on the composition, there's a lot of open space above the subjects head, The eye will tend to pull away from the main subject, which is the bride and groom.

Murray

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Permalink Reply by Kiranlal on March 21, 2010 at 3:14am

Hi,
As already everyone has told the first image is so blurry and not focused anywhere(may be the equipment has some problem).Also here the compositon is bad because the subject is not fully in the frame plus the object behind the neck in the left seems to be disturbing.May be you could have tried to focused on the models eyes + reduced the exposure + could have used the light falling on her from the right to get well contrast and shadowed image according to the expression on models face.

And the second shot is so good it just lack the composition as mentioned and the darker silhouette which could have made it look good.And on composing I think if you brought both the persons in the frame but positoning as you have done already could have made it good as here it has lost some portion of brides dress!

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Permalink Reply by Ora Pasion on March 21, 2010 at 4:08am

Edited photos, aka, is this right?

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Permalink Reply by Ora Pasion on March 21, 2010 at 4:16am

next edited photo even tho it is a bit fuzzy framing the face tighter is what you were talking about

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