Any thoughts?

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Permalink Reply by Jared Weaver on February 3, 2012 at 10:15pm

It is lacking a subject in my opinion. The power lines are very distracting and draw your eye away from anything that might be considered the subject. 

Permalink Reply by Gary Vernon on February 4, 2012 at 1:47am

I agree with Jared,

it's quite busy with no real subject or lines to focus and hold the attention..

The black and white rendering is also a little flat..

For example this one below is a similar "Urban concrete" scene i edited for a photographer here a while back - it has a subject to focus on within the sprawl of the concrete..

Permalink Reply by Raghuram S on February 4, 2012 at 7:44am

Somehow, i do not see a regular pattern... there are too many subjects distracting the pattern of pillars (assuming this is the prime subject).. Probably, you could have tried to have the pillar (power line) at the center and look for similar patterns on both sides...

Permalink Reply by Lea M on February 4, 2012 at 9:18am

Thanks for your comments. I clearly need to work more on my composition. Gary, nice picture!