Permalink Reply by Jason Fortner on February 14, 2012 at 8:53pm I'm not sure what you want me to look at here. I find my eye is being drawn all over the page. I like it, but I feel there is something missing.
I think what you trying to say is that the picture needs a subject.
As Trevor has mentioned, this image really needs a subject.
The other aspect that ruins it for me is the excessive noise especially prominent in the sky - i can't read the exif data for the ISO setting, but i would hazard a guess looking at the sharpening halo's that it's to do with processing technique as well..
Thank you guys for the advice. I can see a subject in my imagination, maybe a loving couple or a child or something. these were files from my first pictures when I started shooting and wanted to practice some processing.
These missions are a photographers delight and I wish i knew then what i know now when i was there.
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