That is quite a nice photo. The eyes of your subject are in sharp focus which is good. Now just crop some of the bokeh out so that the eyes are on a plane with thirds both directions. Repost and see if you might like it better.
I could show you if you would agree that I might.
Thank you Warren,
closing in initially and getting the crop right in camera would be better of course because of the resolution lost by cropping in post..