I like the shot overall. But, the vignette doesn't really work for me, it's just a little too much. This is an odd angle that bothers me a little. You've cut off the left wing, the top of the right vertical stabilizer, and the entire front of the aircraft. It looks like the back half of an F-15 balancing on the two main landing gear. Moving your position slightly to your right I think, would have added a little more of the airframe and not making it look like something is missing.
But, back to my first comment, I like the concept, exposure and overall feel of the image.