Much better than the previous post. Well done but I see the focus is not on the face. Maybe make the aperture bigger so that more can be captured.
I agree with Trevor, the composition is a lot better,
unfortunately it's out of focus where it matters which is the eyes / head part..
I think if you want to continue with close up's / macro you will need to think about investing in a
different lens as this current one you have is too limiting..