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alright so i posted a photo befor ( a picture of a back with a black bra) i got some crit. on it and so im trying again... dont hold back, but dont be too hars lol. soo, what do you think? portfolio material or not?

(im not to fond of this one but i thought id put it up just to see)

 

 

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sorry its still not showing up when i try to add it the way it says to.
this is the picture.

I like the idea - The background is too dark and therefore you are loosing some detail and the under arm area doesn't quite work for me I don't like the lines under the arm (if you know what I mean). I do like the upper arm though. If you are going to go for the dark and moody then I think a closer crop on just one part of her body would work be interesting - I haven't done anything about the background etc but have just done a couple of quick crops to give you an idea of what I me. Hope you don't mind.

thankss! ill deff keep that in mind. =)
Hi,i played about with the image in ps ,adjusting contrast and cropping slightly.

I would prefer at least a hint of the head, perhaps from the twinkle of light from behind. Without it I rather see body parts instead of a person, mutilated parts (see the hand) from CSI or “Freddie Kruger”.
A good title always helps, sometimes, literally, saving the picture itself.
PS: I agree with everything mentionned before me.
I also think a shot like this is better shooting directly from the side,rather than slightly above so you have a profile,would suit this image better.
Thank you to all who respnded! your feed back has really helpd. =)

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