Portfolio Material TAKE TWO

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Permalink Reply by wojomojo on February 6, 2010 at 5:36pm

sorry its still not showing up when i try to add it the way it says to.
this is the picture.

Permalink Reply by Rachel Michaels on February 6, 2010 at 7:46pm

I like the idea - The background is too dark and therefore you are loosing some detail and the under arm area doesn't quite work for me I don't like the lines under the arm (if you know what I mean). I do like the upper arm though. If you are going to go for the dark and moody then I think a closer crop on just one part of her body would work be interesting - I haven't done anything about the background etc but have just done a couple of quick crops to give you an idea of what I me. Hope you don't mind.

Permalink Reply by wojomojo on February 6, 2010 at 7:56pm

thankss! ill deff keep that in mind. =)

Permalink Reply by iain dunne on February 7, 2010 at 1:20am

Hi,i played about with the image in ps ,adjusting contrast and cropping slightly.

Permalink Reply by nvfriendly on February 7, 2010 at 8:29am

I would prefer at least a hint of the head, perhaps from the twinkle of light from behind. Without it I rather see body parts instead of a person, mutilated parts (see the hand) from CSI or “Freddie Kruger”.
A good title always helps, sometimes, literally, saving the picture itself.
PS: I agree with everything mentionned before me.

Permalink Reply by iain dunne on February 7, 2010 at 9:23am

I also think a shot like this is better shooting directly from the side,rather than slightly above so you have a profile,would suit this image better.

Permalink Reply by wojomojo on February 7, 2010 at 9:48am

Thank you to all who respnded! your feed back has really helpd. =)