What's wrong with this picture?

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Permalink Reply by Shawn Fennell on November 11, 2011 at 12:29pm

TO my eye, it's a tad unsharp... it's almost there, but either the focus is a tiny bit off, or maybe a touch of motion blur?

Permalink Reply by Antonio Sanchez on November 12, 2011 at 9:08am

Thank you for your replay, Shawn.

Yes, I also think is a bit blurry.  I used a tripod and tried to make it as sharp as possible but I couldn't.  I think is a splash of light.  I'm not sure what made it a bit blurry.

 

Thanks anyway! =D

Permalink Reply by iain dunne on November 13, 2011 at 12:58am

For me, too much negative space, and needs more contrast and sharpness! Also try using flash (off camera) this will freeze any motion better, as the exposure will be coming from the burst of flash! :)

Permalink Reply by Antonio Sanchez on November 13, 2011 at 4:56am

Thank you so much for your kind comment, Iain.  I will try that.!

Permalink Reply by Huseyin Gokhan Orucoglu on November 13, 2011 at 3:12pm

I prefer to retouch to explain my thoughts.  I hope you do not mind.  Mostly I agree with Iain.