White Lady

Replies to This Discussion

Permalink Reply by Gary Vernon on September 10, 2011 at 2:46am

 

First of all i'm not sure what's going on in the image, i feel there is a story, but i am clueless as to whats happening because of no support info?

The image overall is blurred, the expression and the background is uninteresting, it would have been better to place the subject on the 2 thirds camera right line and i am left wondering about the title?

Is this a fancy dress comp?

Permalink Reply by vhens on September 19, 2011 at 4:29am

yes , my friend entered a pageant and that is her costume for her talent portion...

thank you for the criticism...

Permalink Reply by Bob Jinks on September 10, 2011 at 4:30am

What an intriguing image.  The hands are a total contradiction of the expression in the face. And are those bruises?  This images poses more questions than answers to the extent that the lack of focus becomes much less of an issue for me.

Permalink Reply by vhens on September 19, 2011 at 4:30am

thank you for the criticism...

it can help a lot...

Permalink Reply by JUSTIN GEORGE on September 10, 2011 at 8:38pm

lack of texture in subjects face

Permalink Reply by vhens on September 19, 2011 at 4:29am

:)

 

Permalink Reply by vhens on September 19, 2011 at 4:28am

thank you so much ... :)

 

Permalink Reply by William J. Dabovich on September 21, 2011 at 4:28am

This is very interesting; it almost seems a bit abstract. I do agree with Gary, that I think the subject would be best in the 2/3 camera right. I find the space on the right side more distracting than complimentary. The way this image looks to me is that she's had a rough life but she's holding on to her faith. That's just me. Maybe if she looked down at the rosary, or kept the same stare and closed the mouth and directed the eyes to the left (with her positioned in the camera right side of the frame.) Hope this helps!

Permalink Reply by vhens on September 22, 2011 at 3:12am

thank you for that idea sir... I really appreciate it