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Comment by Tomy Trust on October 6, 2011 at 5:51am

Allright man, my english is not perfect, so I try to describe it.. First: picture must have some idea. What do you want to tell. Train will be more interesting, if you put some land around, tell us story about object. You was too close to object. Try to lay down, with different angle may be object more impressive. Land on the left, train on the right. Try the rules of thirds - it is based on the fact that the human eye is naturally drawn to a point about two-thirds up a page. Crop your photo so that the main subjects are located around one of the intersection points rather than in the center of the image. I hope, this will help.

Comment by Michael Blackwell on October 6, 2011 at 5:37am

No problem Tomy... I don't mind "constructive criticism", but if you have nothing to offer other than no concept, bad angle... you can leave those comments to yourself.  At least offer something that you may have done differently.

Comment by Tomy Trust on October 6, 2011 at 5:25am

No concept, bad angle. Sorry pal.